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paper.md

@@ -185,41 +185,35 @@ For example, using this [sample from the bagit-ro tool]
 
 There is a section that lists aggregated files:
 
-"aggregates": [
-
-  { "uri": "../data/numbers.csv",
-    "mediatype": "text/csv"
-  },
+>"aggregates": [
+>
+>  { "uri": "../data/numbers.csv",
+>    "mediatype": "text/csv"
+>  },
 
 And a separate place to describe *annotations* on those files:
 
-"annotations": [
-
-    { "about": "../data/numbers.csv",
-      "content": "annotations/numbers.jsonld",
-      "createdBy": {
-        "name": "Stian Soiland-Reyes",
-        "orcid": "http://orcid.org/0000-0001-9842-9718"
-      }
-    }
+>"annotations": [
+>
+>{ "about": "../data/numbers.csv",
+>  "content": "annotations/numbers.jsonld",
+>  "createdBy": {
+>    "name": "Stian Soiland-Reyes",
+>    "orcid": "http://orcid.org/0000-0001-9842-9718"
+>  }
+>}
 
 With the actual description of the numbers.csv file residing in `annotations/numbers.jsonld`.
 
-{ "@context": { "@vocab": "http://purl.org/dc/terms/", "dcmi": "http://purl.org/dc/dcmitype/Dataset"},
-  "@id": "../../data/numbers.csv",
-  "@type": "dcmi:Dataset",
-  "title": "CSV files of beverage consumption",
-  "description": "A CSV file listing the number of cups/mugs consumed per person."
-
-}
-
-The
-The PAV ontology used by has several 
+>{ "@context": { "@vocab": "http://purl.org/dc/terms/", "dcmi": "http://purl.org/dc/dcmitype/Dataset"},
+>  "@id": "../../data/numbers.csv",
+>  "@type": "dcmi:Dataset",
+>  "title": "CSV files of beverage consumption",
+>  "description": "A CSV file listing the number of cups/mugs consumed per person."
+>}
 
-Our experience in implementing systems tells us that it very likely that in real
-life
 
-- The ontology they use based on PROV is all about nuanced kinds of authorship
+- The  PAV ontology they use based on PROV is all about nuanced kinds of authorship
   that we don't think implementers will get right
 - Uses lots of little files